dringend

[Hansi456]

Hallo nochmal,

könntet Ihr mir bitte folgenden Text verbessern/kontrollieren für meine Schulaufgabe; denn mein Englisch ist nicht gerade das beste:

Wäre sehr nett von Euch.

Vielen Dank

Hansi

Explanation: Exploration of the wine-growing district with the circumjacent villages whose church and whose palaces/castles. For the day trip you will need 8-10 hours. Certainly you can expand the trip of two or more days. We are offer to you enough tourist attraction. This trip is mainly for tourists who are interested in viniculture and who like culure and events. You can start the exploration at the train station or at the heart of the town. A quiet number of houses are protected as historic monuments (Info sheet is available by Schloss Entenstein). Go straight ahead (if you come from station or from heart of the town) to the village well. Arrived by the village well you will see the next two finish`s: “Schloss Entenstein” (on the right side you can see a long wall and behind there is the “Schloss Entenstein” the church “St.Leodegar”(is straight to you; (church with a big tower)). At first we will go into Schloss Entenstein, today it´s a municipal administration (you get also tourist infos there). Next we go to the château park and make the educational trail, there (informations see above). After that we go into the “St.Leodegar”-church (go back to the village well, then you see it) (infomations about the church will you also find above). One necessity more is the chapel, which was restored. We find it, when we come out of the church of the right hand sight (a little building, a few yards from here (30m)). Our next stopp is the „Erste Markgräfler Winzergenossenschaft“. Go 100 m straight in the direction of the area “Sonnenstück”, and you will see a red building of the right hand sight, this is it. Here we also visit the co-operative of growers (infos see above) and can ask about a guideline.

[ingot]

Verfasst am: 03.11.2009 20:55 Titel: dringend

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Hallo Hansi,

so ist das schon viel besser, weil es mehr nach Hansi klingt und nicht so sehr nach irgendeiner halb verdauten Broschüre

Alles Gute noch,
ingot

Explanation: Exploration of the wine-growing area with the surrounding villages, its church and
alaces/castles. The day trip will take 8-10 hours. Of course, you can extend your stay by two or more days. We can offer you a number of tourist attractions ( attractive sights ). This trip is mainly for tourists who are interested in viniculture and who like culture and ( local ) events. You can start the exploration at the train station or at the center of the town. Quite a number of houses are protected as historic monuments (an information sheet ( brochure ) is available at Entenstein castle). Go straight ahead (if you come from the station or from the center of the town) to the village well. From the village well you will see the next two sights: “Schloss Entenstein” (on the right you can see a long wall and behind “Schloss Entenstein” the church “St.Leodegar”(it is straight ahead of you, the church with a tall steeple). First, we will go into "Schloss Entenstein", where the city has offices today (you can also get tourist information there). Next, we will go to the château ( castle ) park and do the educational trail there (informations see above). After that, we will go into the church “St.Leodegar” (go back to the village well, you will see it from there) Infomation about the church is also to be found above). One more sight you must not miss is the chapel, which has been restored. As we we come out of the church we will find it on the right hand side (a little building, a few yards from there (30m)). Our next stop is the „Erste Markgräfler Winzergenossenschaft“ ( the first "Margravial" wine-growers cooperative ). If you go 100 m straight ahead in the direction of the area “Sonnenstück” you will see a red building on the right hand side and you are there. Here we will also visit the cooperative of growers (information see above) and can ask about a guided tour ( Führung? ).
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[ingot]

Das war zwar "dringend", aber wohl trotzdem kein Dankeschön wert
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When the final curtain drops, the applause may be less than thunderous. So what! There is no more need for bows.

[Ronald]

Vielleicht sollte eins der lustigen Männchen , die wir hier schon mal setzen, mit 'ner AXT winken...
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