Supporting letter

[Sophia2801]

Hallo, Leute!

Ich wäre euch super dankbar, wenn ihr mir helfen könntet. Ich brauche ein Bewerbungsschreiben auf Englisch verfassen und da ich seit zwei Jahren kein Wort mehr auf Englsich gesprochen habe würde ich gerne eure Korrekturen zur Kenntnis nehmen. Schonmal vielen Dank im Vorau.

A supporting letter for a practice work in Intern for Management Support

Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read a lot of information with amount interest about E.ON concern. I have a big request to start a job in energy concern after finishing economical study in university of Bochum. A 4-week practice work (unfortunately it is impossible to make a longer practice work because of adjustment from diploma to bachelor) in such successful concern like E.ON will be a great experience for my future job life. My aim is to apply my theoretical knowledge which I obtain in the university into the praxis and E.ON offers the perfect basis for the conversion of my aim.
I would like to take a part on the challenges of strategy development, the expertise of energy and Management Support.
My forces are will to learn, big motivation and the ability to work in a team group. I would like to accentuate my good knowledge in Russian and Kyrghyz languages and my cooperativeness.
If you require any further information I can be contacted directly on xxxxx, otherwise I look forward to your reply in due course.

Yours Sincerely,

[ingot]

Dear Sir or Madam,

Having done a good deal of background reading on E.ON, I have become very much interested in your company. I would therefore like to request that you give me the chance of an internship in the energy field after the completion of my studies in economics at the University of Bochum. The work experience, acquired during a 4-week stint with a company of your stature, would be highly beneficial to my future career. Unfortunately, a longer internship would not be possible due to the change-over from "Diplom" to "Bachelor" within my course of studies. It is my aim to apply the theoretical knowledge, which I am presently receiving at the university, to a practical situation. For this, E.ON would appear to be the perfect company.
I would like to take part in the challenges of developing strategies, gain expertise in the energy field as well as in management support. The strengths I would be bringing to this job are a high degree of motivation, the ability to work within a team and my cooperativeness. May I also point out that I have a good knowledge of the Russian and Kirghiz languages.
Should you require further information, I can be contacted directly by phone at 015126369036, otherwise I would be pleased to hear from you in due course.

Yours sincerely,

Alles Gute, Sophia
ingot
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[Sophia2801]

wow.. danke schön.. so eine ausführliche und tolle korrektur habe ich nicht mal erwartete.. vielen vielen dank. jetzt heißt es abwarten und daumen drücken.

Schönen Dienstag dir!